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Ayama Yoru
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-06-27 Age : 27 Location : In your Closet (ill kill you soon)
| Subject: Ayama Yoru Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:17 pm | |
| Basic Information:
Name:Ayama Yoru
Nickname:Yoru/ Night
Age:18
Gender:Female
Looks: Long white blond hair thats reaches the middle of her back, her bangs sweep to the right of her face and fall to the sides. She is always wearing a head band that has ribbons on the ends that blend into her hair even though the ribbon is either blood red or pitch black depending on which one she wears. Her skin is pale like a piece of paper because she never goes out in the day time thats why she named herself The Moon Flower at Night. Her eyes are blood red and are frozen in a glaring poisition, and have been that way for as long as she can remember. She always wears a black ribbon chocker clompletely covering her neck and from the ribbon hangs a red jewel she found the night she woke up after the 'incident'. She wears a long black cloak that reaches to her ankles, but when she joined the Akatsuki she immediately changed into the 'uniform', the black cloak with the red clouds on it. Personality:She is very Michevious and likes to wear things out of tradition, she is the rebel of every group and she likes to be the leader of almost everything, she has a temper that is not easily sparked yet when it is sparked you better get away from her because she goes insane with the need to kill. She is also a very loud and expressive person. She has a knack for getting into trouble she is the one to bring trouble where ever she goes. Even though she is in the Akatsuki, she has no control over her emotions, which run her whole existence, if shes mad she fights with whoever for no reason, if shes sad she will up and dissapear fro no reason, (etc).
Likes:Anything sweet, and she also like a good challenge.
Dislikes:Anything sour, and other loud mouthed people.
Extras: No extras.
Shinobi Information:
Village:Sunagakure
Clan: Yoru (look at background)
Rank: Akatsuki
Elements: Fire, Lighting, Earth, Weapons: A Cythe she appropriately named Shikyo
Summons: NO summons Jutsu:. Lightning Release: Kirin Lightning Style: False Darkness Lightning Release: Lightning Blade LimeLight Hardening Technique
Gengutsu: Demonic Illusion: Toad Confrontation Singing
Medical: Poison Release: Poison Hydra Barrage Skill
Kinjutsu: Chakra Confusion Seal Illusion Skill Seal Sealing Technique: Ruin Seal Of The Niether World Sealing Technique: Complete Nine Dragon Phantom Seal Sealing Technique: 5 Seal Barrier Sealing Technique: Secret Seal Release Sealing Technique: Pyramid Seal Of Doom Gedo Mark Gedo Mark Release Five Point Barrier Sealing Technique: Hachi`s Gate Forbidden Technique: Resurrection Of The Impure World Forbidden Technique: Living Corpse Reincarnation Forbidden Technique: Life Giver Forbidden Technique: Oral Rebirth Forbidden Technique: Twin Snake Double Assassination Demonic Illusion: Burning Paper Body Demonic Illusion: Mirror Heaven and Earth Change Demonic Illusion: Shackling Stakes Dusk Crow Genjutsu Ephemeral Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique Fire Release: Phoenix Immortal Fire Technique Shadow Clone Technique
Background Information:
Background:Ayama Yoru dosnt remember what really happened the night she woke up and her family lay dead in front of her, but i will tell you what happened. She had just come home from a long mission that had taken almost a week to accomplish, she had gone to her room and went to sleep like normal, but then in the middle of the night she got up grapped Shikyo and killed her family and as she faught her family , Mother, Father, and younger brother, her eyes glazed over with red , blood red, once the task of killing her family was acomplished she put Shikyo back where she got and went back to sleep like nothing had even happened. She had woken the next morning to see her family dead on the floor. She had no idea what had happened, but later in life she will find out that she was cursed, cursed to kill anything she cared for, no matter who or what it was.
Family:She had a Mother, Father and Younger Brother by the names of Akiko Yoru, Hideki Yoru and Kazue Yoru. Her name had been Yuzuki Yoru. But she changed it to fit her new life.
RP Sample: Ayama Yoru walks up to the edge of the cliff looking over carefully, she has no idea why she is here, yet she feels that she needs to be here. For some reason she was drawn to this spot, maybe it was the the fact that if she took a step forword she would just end this torture that she is pu through everyday. The not knowing who she really is, was she someone great?Was she some one worth remembering? Was she even worth anything? . . . she had no idea, the only thing she did know was that she was more determined than ever to get the truth, one day she would get the truth.
Last edited by Ayama Yoru on Sat Jul 03, 2010 6:15 pm; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : Corrections.) | |
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| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:35 pm | |
| remove flame rasengan,and you will have to give a back ground stating what happened and why she cant remember it.Make an app for her weapon please.knock down an element,and raise her age,no 14 year olds in the akat |
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| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:37 pm | |
| Also you will need to tell us who taught you chidori,which wont be sasuke or kakashi so might just want to remove it.For any further questions about how things are dont here,please read the rules.And as for her family state them too |
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| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Wed Jun 30, 2010 11:38 pm | |
| and if your not going to supply us with a picture your looks need to be about 2-3 paragraphs long,trust me none of this is to much to ask |
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| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:03 am | |
| Also if you could expound on her personality,im sure you could think of more things to put,sorry if this sounds like a lot but,your applying for a high rank so you have to do more work |
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| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:05 am | |
| Also do me one last favor,put all your jutsu in some sort of order,and describe it.If you do all the things iv listed above you will be approved in no time |
| | | Drake Nightingale Anbu
Posts : 62 Join date : 2010-06-25
| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:11 am | |
| For the background u need more, just because she doesn't remember her background doesn't mean she doesn't have one so make it longer and tell why she doesn't remember | |
| | | Ayama Yoru
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-06-27 Age : 27 Location : In your Closet (ill kill you soon)
| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:04 pm | |
| i get it thanx so much people : P ill get right on it. | |
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| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:06 pm | |
| ^^ thank you for understanding |
| | | Ayama Yoru
Posts : 3 Join date : 2010-06-27 Age : 27 Location : In your Closet (ill kill you soon)
| Subject: Re: Ayama Yoru Thu Jul 01, 2010 8:08 pm | |
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